Post by _ k e s s h o on Oct 29, 2005 1:05:35 GMT -5
Unfortunately...it's that time of year again. Now, I'm not talking about exams...I'm talking about my emo-mode. While I can go emo on normal days...during emo-mode, most pieces of art will not look decent until I fulfill the emo-ness. Hence, here comes a piece I wrote for my very final English [as in Literature] exam...[in other words, imagery must come in the truckload]...and I decided to retranscribe into my current words...couldnt be bothered placing it elsewhere, but I needed somewhere to emo-off. *shrugs* Unbeta-ed, obviously, since an exam piece cant be beta-ed anyway...
SMILE
I remember when we used to be at the fields, the wind singing its hollow song through your swift hair, the sunlight reflecting off it and travelling towards the sea, stars speckled on its calm blue water, like the night sky has fallen towards the earth to reveal the day. I remember when we ran through the long untamed grass, laughing as the grass brushed our skin, that smile always on your face, a smile so serene it gave a feeling of peace I never thought was possible to reach. I thought I would always feel this peace forever.
Then the day came where the fields turned into ash, and the soil was left eroded and cracked, and it stretched for miles with no end. I called out your name, but you never responded. The skies were crimson with sorrow and rained down tears of blood, each drop falling to the ground to moisten the dry doom, but only to taint it further. Darkness was the only thing that welcomed me, and you were not there. You disappeared, and left me here. I could not forgive you for what you have done, I would never forgive you.
But then the day came where the skies no longer cried its tears of blood, and then opened up to reveal its purity once more. The greens crept back from the ground to meet with the day long awaited. However, the beauty was gone. All was gone the day you left. You placed your hand on my shoulder. I turned around, and you were there. But I could not forgive you. Then you gave me that smile. That smile of peace that always brought me to a world of tranquillity. Your eyes were more glorious than the sun, and you asked me why did I not follow you? That as you were running through the long grasses, you felt my presence was no longer around. You thought I was lost, and you came back to find me, meeting only despair on your journey. And you told me that the beauty came back to the world only as you saw me. I still could not forgive you. There was nothing to forgive. The world only returned when we saw each other. You smiled. The smile that always took me to a world that I would never leave, a world where the grass is always green and untamed, and the sea always sparkled with the stars that fell from the sky, and the wind that always played its silent soothing melody. We were always there, by the fields, and you were always smiling.
fin.
Emo-mode hinders my study process...worse of all...it hinders my design process...why couldnt it choose another time to appear?! Exams...*sobs*
SMILE
I remember when we used to be at the fields, the wind singing its hollow song through your swift hair, the sunlight reflecting off it and travelling towards the sea, stars speckled on its calm blue water, like the night sky has fallen towards the earth to reveal the day. I remember when we ran through the long untamed grass, laughing as the grass brushed our skin, that smile always on your face, a smile so serene it gave a feeling of peace I never thought was possible to reach. I thought I would always feel this peace forever.
Then the day came where the fields turned into ash, and the soil was left eroded and cracked, and it stretched for miles with no end. I called out your name, but you never responded. The skies were crimson with sorrow and rained down tears of blood, each drop falling to the ground to moisten the dry doom, but only to taint it further. Darkness was the only thing that welcomed me, and you were not there. You disappeared, and left me here. I could not forgive you for what you have done, I would never forgive you.
But then the day came where the skies no longer cried its tears of blood, and then opened up to reveal its purity once more. The greens crept back from the ground to meet with the day long awaited. However, the beauty was gone. All was gone the day you left. You placed your hand on my shoulder. I turned around, and you were there. But I could not forgive you. Then you gave me that smile. That smile of peace that always brought me to a world of tranquillity. Your eyes were more glorious than the sun, and you asked me why did I not follow you? That as you were running through the long grasses, you felt my presence was no longer around. You thought I was lost, and you came back to find me, meeting only despair on your journey. And you told me that the beauty came back to the world only as you saw me. I still could not forgive you. There was nothing to forgive. The world only returned when we saw each other. You smiled. The smile that always took me to a world that I would never leave, a world where the grass is always green and untamed, and the sea always sparkled with the stars that fell from the sky, and the wind that always played its silent soothing melody. We were always there, by the fields, and you were always smiling.
fin.
Emo-mode hinders my study process...worse of all...it hinders my design process...why couldnt it choose another time to appear?! Exams...*sobs*
? The teacher must be angry and wonder why don't you just go and be a writer. (although you are one already)
Hence why I call myself a struggling textual artist...] yeah, I used this for my final exam...I think this piece saved the rest of my paper [which were essays, which I pretty much sucked at]
